X-Mas Memoirs Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

X-Mas Memoirs

Rating: 5.0


Its X Mas today

My darling..

The greatest of the days

The Auspicious birthday

Of A divine child

Off a Virgin mother,

An occasion of Chorus

From a Billion lips

For the revered child...


And can you predict

My darling

How I feel and think

At present, at this moment?



Had you been in my life

Ages Ago, in some Century

Lost in the dustbin of past

We would have celebrated

This moment,

Somewhere on a shore

By the Sea,

Or Beside a table

Under the Candle light-

In some Hotel or

A modern Restaurant,

In the fading reflections

Of the candle

On the droplets of Sweat on our faces,

Like the droplets of dew of tears

Down the cheeks,

In A warm wish and

A sweet message

For the ensuing New Year! ! !

X-Mas Memoirs
Monday, April 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,love and friendship,love and life,messages,date,longing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suratha Kumar Rout 13 November 2017

Its X Mas today My darling.. The greatest of the days The Auspicious birthday Of A divine child Off a Virgin mother, An occasion of Chorus From a Billion lips For the revered child... This poepoem is really amazing. Thanks for sharing. 10++++++

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Sabita Sahoo 08 June 2016

The greatest of the days The Auspicious birthday Of A divine child Off a Virgin mother, I appreciate this concept in that line. Thanks for sharing the poem. 10 marks. Thanks

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Anita Aparajita Das 16 May 2016

The Auspicious birthday Of A divine child Off a Virgin mother, An occasion of Chorus From a Billion lips For the revered child... Beautiful concept of love, respect and harmony. Love it. 10. Nitu

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Seema Sharma Rimi 14 May 2016

Had you been in my life Ages Ago, in some Century Lost in the dustbin of past We would have celebrated This moment, Somewhere on a shore By the Sea, Or Beside a table Under the Candle light- In some Hotel or A modern Restaurant, In the fading reflections Of the candle On the droplets of Sweat on our faces, Like the droplets of dew of tears Down the cheeks, In A warm wish and A sweet message For the ensuing New Year! ! ! Beautiful celebration of the x mas and the the birth of Christ. Loved it.10 for it.

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Valsa George 22 April 2016

A lovely poem commemorating a great day.... the birth of Jesus Christ! I enjoyed the way you have visualized how you would have celebrated this day in the company of your beloved!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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