Wednesday, March 5, 2008

X Letter To The Poet 1 Comments

Rating: 3.4

Dear poet,

I use your poems to feed on my fire,
to keep burning the desire.
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ONElia AVElar
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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 August 2012

Excuse me, if i did misuse, Your poems come without instructions, can be misinterpreted or misused so. - amazing 10+++

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Original Unknown Girl 07 February 2012

Love this poem, the idea in it is brilliant and of course we all use poems to our own end so anyone can interpret the lines exactly as they perceive them to be! Good reading your work again: -) xx

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Comment to the poem 2. Time goes by. Is it matter again? Somebody wonders whether poet (herself) can re-live her emotions condensing them into lines. So next time she can intensify her real as well as literary experiences. The poet could wonder where one of her friends gets to.

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Indira Babbellapati 16 January 2009

once posted, a poem becomes the exclusive property of the reader...and the reading of it depends upon the reader's experience levels, am i right?

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premji premji 08 September 2008

words shower like fire while reading you

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 September 2008

A poem with a different taste. A nice non-typical piece, I love it.

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Coach Roth 07 September 2008

No matter what our skill, those of us that attempt poetry know the power of words, and they don't come with instructions...and so can mean so many things...which is what we love...well done...Coach

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James B. Earley 04 September 2008

Poetry....life's greatest aphrodisiac! Excellent composition.

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The life that I have got and the life that I wish. In the middle there is poetry.

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David Desantis 27 May 2008

so writing keeps your fire going huh? I think it's the other way around.

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Rani Turton 16 May 2008

Tongue in cheek, did you say? This one was lovely. Thanks Onelia.

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Original Unknown Girl 02 May 2008

Oh I love this Onelia! It is true, poems do not come with instructions! They can be interpreted anyway a person wants. What I do take from this though is a tremendous sense of humour and a great play with words. Loved it! HG: -) xx

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Dr.subhendu Kar 17 March 2008

Eden`s apple when shared Bible`s snake when bites the desire seems to fire till the thirst dies dry by tthe addiction for yet long years.............quite smooching when luscious,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Aashish Ameya 05 March 2008

i think we poets also need to thank readers...good one...

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