Keen on suit and tie, but what do coat and tie mean?
Mean indeed, can the gentlemen be if only on money they're keen
Lean on compassion, liking to put up a scene
Seen as handsome but on their shoulder not a cripple could lean
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Wow! , really fascinating...beautiful message within those nicely crafted words. You are really venturing into the world of greater possibilities....keep going Hans. A perfect 10.
Fascinating, especially as I've never seen the 'mirroring' in simply a sestet form yet. Looks well done, if substituting the same-sounding word seen/scene is acceptable, which variations are usually allowed. Fascinating and thought-provoking. I enjoyed the entire piece. Excellent! ! !
The mask of out worldly well dressed people is humorously exposed. Thought provoking poem.