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This poem has everything Beauty, Joy, Passion and the downsides as regret failure and defeat. Still we are all survivors right up until we leave. Thankyou for sharing your thought provoking gracefull poetry

A strong questions asked in a direct way...Good Job Madame. Merna

Great poem, I love it! It asks the questions alot of us already asks ourself...for me as a young woman who love God, I realy believe that no life will ever taste true satisfaction without knowing Him in a personal relationship! And together with this, I think the most unhappy life is the one who never lived life to its fullest, yet in a way they won't regret it one day. Thanx for the poem!

Can't agree with all the questions there but i do agree that you've got that potential to be with those top very soon.. :) regards, ugliloner.

when it comes down to it, i believe that the central questions posed in this poem can really be summed up as one thing: did we make our life the best life that we could possibly live, for ourselves? and that is what life is all about i think. in some cases, when we really care about someone, the best life for ourselves is to make that loved one's life the best we can. but you need to be living a life that gives you purpose. i think that is an important idea and one more people should recognize, instead of getting bogged down in what is 'right' or the social 'norm'. this poem has a message that rings true to me, and i suspect to many others as well.

i like it it was a mix, i do what i can in life

no I didnt M.A. - no I did not! ! !

no I didnt M.A. - no I did not! ! !

Or were totally overwhelmed by life And let all happenings annoy? Did you commit yourself To live with ultimate passion? Or let your precious life be snuffed out Without any satisfaction? what as sweet and life related and reality based poem done with professional way and it shows you a perfect poet and have much in brain to express...this poems is really a great and good poem..10/10

I prefer to say the twilight of my life, because I cannot stay up that late. I loved your poem, its questions should all be answered in a positive way, its the only way to live. My body may be aging but my spirit is fine and enjoying life to the full. Early morning to see the dawn of new day is for me a blissful way to start the day.

well, very body defines life differently, so did u, gr8 work....10++

I enjoyed both your style and your comments on life. Life certainly should be lived to the full. Kindest Regards, Irene

wonderfully deep reflection of life....very well written....inspiring work my friend

A very deep insight of life that makes you wonder how u live each day. its touching and inspiring. lovely read :)

I like this! its very soulful if that makes any sense! it makes me think on how I might see my life even now. very good! !

The lord likes it.........best

Dear Madam Please let us know who you are. Do not remain anonymous for surely you deserve the accolades. Your mind is very alert to have put such a masterpiece together. Sadly we are only able to give you a 10 out of 10 which does not do End of life justice. I applaud you

Reading the poem I never can feel that you have wasted your powers and abilities. A deep reflection indeed. We all do reflect on the same issue but not to the point as you sincerely do. You may think that you have at moments wasted your life but I should say that only a creative person will have such a long reflection! More than showing our abilities, if we are contended with life, that is enough. Only the contentment will remain with us. The rest will dissolve in the din of the world. No man was ever remembered for the exhibition of his abilities nor was completely forgotten for his lack of skills. Our abilities solely rest on the interpretations of the world. May god bless you for a long and creative life.

WOW! ! ! ! great piece of writing... i cant wait to read more.... very nice work! ! ! !

All the right questions to prepare for Judgement Day MA.... very well expressed in poetic language...a good write indeed.