Wednesday, November 16, 2005

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Rating: 5.0

We walk as if on weakening ice
Above a great darkness.
Dancing is - difficult
When the ice is thin.
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Stewart McKenzie
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Rhonda Davis 16 November 2005

VERY NICE. lOVED THE LIGHTNESS OFTHE WORK AND THE IMAGERY.

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Mary Nagy 16 November 2005

I'm terrified of falling through a frozen lake Stewart..........so the metaphor here really got me! Great poem. Sincerely, mary

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