Sunday, August 21, 2011

X..... Amazing Dance Comments

Rating: 3.6

the wavy hard sand
was massaging my feet
when a startled crab
in the shallow sea
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Aufie Zophy
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Bharati Nayak 19 December 2016

Wow- - - - - -I love this poem- - - - - the messaging by wavy hard sand- - - - - - -white pearls of sweat ornamenting the foreheads of waves- - - - - - -just wonderful ! ! !

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Joseph Sanchez 28 April 2014

i felt flawless thorugh out the story

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Cristina Teodor 02 December 2011

Amazing dance of small creatures, of waves dancing sculpting the sand make sea a living entity in its beauty. Amazing write..Cristina Teodor

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