X After An Accident Comments

i am still alive not dead

last two lines are testmony to your compassion...not everyone can think of such imagery...my heartful surrender!

After the accident a new life, all growth blossoming tulips spreading touching our souls. Thank you for this, Avelar

heart - tulip analogy is more than visual - it is a visceral analogy... and so apt. Rgds, Ivan

sad; sadly`; pain; painfull

So touchy poem! The mode of presentation is quiet different. As if nothing happend, but everything occured! The last lines are wonderful.10 for it.

sorrowful lines.very touching.10 and more of peace

Heartless and soulless we run amuck Until we get a jolt; Once awakened we are all heart, The frivolous ego is molt. And then, “it even opens more, like tulip, soak with tears: it grows...” You are superb in your choice of similes, metaphors and silken imagery. Thank you for sharing the beautiful lines.

A tribute to the father. Just as well that somebody does it. Compliments to its author.

Clearly an inspired piece that sees the heart of one who perseveres in the face of adversity. The image of his heart opening up like a tulip watered by tears is simply beautiful. Lovely poem Onelia. justine.

tragedy will teaches us the greatness of love.all the best to you onelia.

Yeah...that's him alright...down to a tee....but you said it so beautifully.Love the very idea of the naked heart and the crying tulip. Beautiful poem for a beautiful guy. love Dee Dee

Love the wild surreal imagery of the naked heart walking abroad in all its grief and glory and the image of the tulip is truly beautiful growing stronger still by the tears that it spills. As always your heart reaches out towards another's heart and touches them with the comfort of your words. love Donall Donall

immortality of Heart well pictorised...

immortality of Heart well pictorised...

Another of your small, precious gifts, One! As delicate as it is poignant. Fx

Oh.... this is so very sad but eloquently expressed. I feel for this person, you can sense the pain. HG: -) xx

a very sensitive poem, the poem, the poet and D are equally sensitive, all three of them have laid bare their sensitive and growing hearts which continually open like the fragrant petals of the 'tulip' and spilling the fragrance for senstive readers, thanx,

ah so beautiful. This clearly conveys a soul that refuses to give up, even after facing intense adversity. You are clearly a great observe Onelia, beautiful words, especially the tulip references

it even opens more, like a red tulip, ...............excellent tribute by the imagery, yet poignant and painful, painful, good write,10/10, thanks for sharing