Friday, June 19, 2015

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Rating: 4.3

It feels like times stopped since that moment
Like I haven't been alive since then
Memories are all I know
What is presently happening
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Linda A
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Khairul Ahsan 09 May 2020

A sad story. A pained expression of abandonement, hopelessness. I didn't like the title of the poem. You may like to consider one of the followings, or some other: Pained Silent Teardrops Unseen Teardrops Sick of Acting

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Roseann Shawiak 27 June 2015

A tender, heart wrenching poem, it has touched my heart with your sadness. A very intense and emotional picture of a love that has done wrong to a person's spirit and essence. You have painted a very vivid picture of your pain. Thank you for sharing this poem, RoseAnn

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Nathan Coppedge 19 June 2015

Nice poem. You're one of my favorites.

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Linda A 19 June 2015

thank you :)

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