Wrongs I Have Done Comments

not to make light of the poem, BUT i believe you have written two things ('wrongs) incorrectly. 1-To hard to ignore.... try TOO hard to ignore AND: to explain what is wrong with: 2- Finally it's mark it made...: i have made the same mistake so i checked just to make sure, and pasted what i found below: IT'S It's is a contraction for it is or it has. Examples: It's = It is It's my bedtime. It's time to go. It's only 11 o'clock. It's over there. It's = It has (not possessive) It's been a long time. It's been brewing awhile. It's got to happen soon. A Mnemonic Device: It's an apostrophe. ITS Its indicates possessive. Or, put a more technical way, its is the possessive form of the neuter pronoun it — his, her, its. Examples: Its possessive Every dog has its day. The jury has reached its decision. Stop its momentum! Guess its color. A Good Rule of Thumb: If you can replace it with his or her, there's no apostrophe. A Mnemonic Device: The possessive dog had its tail removed. ITS' Its' is never correct. Ever. NOW BACK TO a less corrective comment. well MAYBE one more correction; at least i think you may want to change: .....playing in my mind....to PLAY in my mind. what do you think? i think punctuation would have helped me follow the poem more easily. BUT, after all i've already said above, i am choosing to send this poem to my poemlist because i like it quite a lot. thanks for sharing. i've been guilty of some of the same offenses against women i have/do loved/love. three divorces later, i am with a fourth wife. i have learned a little bit, but not a lot, from my relationships. good luck to you (if this is a true story involving you. a reader never knows for sure!) .

A true confession from inner core of soul. so u deserve forgiveness. If you are not getting it means it shall be injustice with you. A nice poem.