Saturday, October 6, 2018

Wrong Life Comments

Rating: 4.0

I'm in the wrong life
I am the wrong wife
I'm somewhere I don't belong
like a tune that never plays along
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Aqua Flower
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Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2020

'I dance alone with two left feet where nothing turns out right and darkness shadows light I'm in the wrong life I am the wrong wife' - so wondefully said, Aqua!

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Bri Edwards 28 February 2020

Sh+t, i just 'lost' my comment! ! '' now i'll make it short and sweet: to MyPoemList. and i'll share eventually............unless you " hold it [your copyright] over my head" ! bri :) p.s. Now you've 'taken the bull(sh+t) by the horns'! ! Good for YOU!

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Aqua Flower 03 March 2020

Nah....you gave me two comments. I am glad you liked it! It was quite effective! :)

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bri edwards 28 February 2020

I step to a tuba-player's beat. Do they even HAVE a " beat" ? Beats me to He....ck! ! Unless you object, I'll send this to MyPoemList and share it with others...someday. Well, AT LEAST i'll send to MyPoemList. Let me know if your " copyright" will cause me trouble; i guess you can just say: " Sure, go ahead and share, Bri." to MyPoemList. bri :) I guess you finally took the bull by the horns! ! !

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