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Rini, this Mafia man is a danger to others and himself.++10

My, my Rini, this is such a powerful poem. These are regular occurences in life. There are people with two sides to them. I am reminded of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. I like the ending. No one wins when they play a bad game. Miraculously, my vote button has started to function. A full vote for this poem

You come with a bouquet But carry a gun in your pocket I can't understand you the real man within you........fantastic presentation with wonderful imagination. This poem is a lesson to the people of present society. Thank u dear Rini for sharing this lovely poem.10

Hi Rini, Exquisitely phrased and rhymed. A warning to all those who are two-faced, who hide their real character with maladies intentions. What happens when the mask is removed? Definitely it is going to happen one day. There is a saying, You can not deceive anybody long. Very poignant thought.

This is a very true to life thought invoking poem.

The curtain which you keep is just to hurt others so deep Excellent writing Rini Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken