Wanting you to be someone you were not
Thoughts of love changing the way you are
My love could cure it all
Wrong again
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perfect stanzaic form, the refrain rhymes so well..the last stanza concludes the upper three...overall beautiful composition
You came across with a surprising yet strong statement there at the end, kinda caught me of guard, Well done again Patricia, Love duncan X
A captivating piece Patricia. Finely delivered and with a great last line.
Nice poem, you picture love as something not perfectly lasting which can be true depending on the factors that created it. Regards.
You drained my soul and have come back wanting more Wrong again...........there is no more, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , great poem, , thanks