Thursday, March 29, 2007

Wrong Again Comments

Rating: 4.4

Wanting you to be someone you were not
Thoughts of love changing the way you are
My love could cure it all
Wrong again
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Patricia Gale
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Jun Insigne 24 July 2008

You drained my soul and have come back wanting more Wrong again...........there is no more, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , great poem, , thanks

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Abha Sharma 19 April 2008

perfect stanzaic form, the refrain rhymes so well..the last stanza concludes the upper three...overall beautiful composition

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rajagopal haran 25 November 2007

you are churning Love and getting gems of poems...great

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Raymond Wright 09 April 2007

Beautifully captured as always, Patricia. I love it. ~Ray

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Duncan Wyllie 30 March 2007

You came across with a surprising yet strong statement there at the end, kinda caught me of guard, Well done again Patricia, Love duncan X

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Declan McHenry 29 March 2007

A captivating piece Patricia. Finely delivered and with a great last line.

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Marvin Brato 29 March 2007

Nice poem, you picture love as something not perfectly lasting which can be true depending on the factors that created it. Regards.

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