Friday, December 1, 2006

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get it out. get it over with.
let them know. let them look amiff.
what I wrote-it is what I feel.
understand: you're not past the peal.
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Landrey
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Sophia White 06 December 2006

Way to totally flip off everyone, jinnius. Poems are like one's personal diary.

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R. S. Farris 04 December 2006

I like it. The mood is definitely there-nice alliteration, and the short sentences make a nice effect. Good and concise, and it sounds like you which is the point after all.

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