Monday, March 14, 2005

Written In Stone Comments

Rating: 4.9

I did not scrawl my words on the strand
Knowing the shifting nature of sand.

Not even the bark of a hardwood tree
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Lee Ann Schaffer
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Robert Hall 04 April 2005

This poem is great. I loved how you had two lines for each phrase and each rymed. I love it when they ryme. Umm what does the word permanence mean. I'm just like a kid huh. Robert

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Lee Ann Schaffer

Lee Ann Schaffer

Charleston, South Carolina, US
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