Written In Native Soil Comments

A nice poem with beautiful images and a nice flow...keep your pen busy...Voted.

your point of view sits on top of a mountain Aiswarya very well done+++10 regards

I agree, this is truly a wonderful poem. I could tell how much you love your hometown. : -)

Hi Aiswarya. your poem is so beautiful. Your hometown is a part of paradise but on earth, you made me dream of visiting your soil. At 12 you're a big poet, keep writing you will have a glowing future. My fatherly kiss to you. 10.

Aiswarya, I can see you are a natural born writer and your work has many beautiful images to enjoy and it is written a lovely flow. Home is a haven for the heart and this is an excellent subject to write about. Well done! 10 love Karin

It's difficult to believe a twelve-year old has this level of vocabulary and general knowledge, but it is very beautiful, I shan't judge the poet, only the poem, and the poem is gloriously beautiful

Written from the heart, a view wider and deeper than the eye excellent poem, thanks... keep writing.

Kerala with all its natural landscape and backwaters is a heaven on this earth. The hometown is always the best place for one who belongs to that native soil. Even a plant likes its mother soil, not to speak of a human being in this regard. A beautiful poem is well composed.

Nothing like home sweet home

A lovely tribute to your hometown A pictursqe landscape painted well With colours glowing and shining The final touch of the shooting star Does highlight your creative talent That I hope many more to flow from you! Angel

AMAZING poem written Ms. Anish you are so talented to make a lengthy poem like this...10+++

wow simply amazing.. at your age you have really created a well crafted poem..keep writing..thanks best regads, jdh

Well done Aiswarya, nicely written piece. Best, Jerry

Good piece, boys shooting stars... strong imagination....carry on Tanish, u have bright future ahead...

Well done Aiswarya. You really have more life ahead and, you will be very great. Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.

Two things, well done and you sure love your hometown. You're a woman of writing, a little woman, that is...lol.

Awesome poem with strong bond and nostalgia. 10+++++ CP

I'm proud of you. You are totally a good poet. I hope you will better in future.

the pulls of native scents are alwyas strong...

Breezes fan her, beauty shines Waters wash her, sunshine dries, When I breathe in the salty air, I hear the winds chant hymns, everyone care The sun kisses the sea, the moon’s seen A synonym of Juno’s mien… Lying on a glowing bed, an infinite sea Stars keep company, an urge to live free hi dear, where are you... while you are with us, water washes and stars gives their company. You are free my dear... free to live.....