Monday, February 8, 2010

Written In Envy Comments

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How lucky you are,
smeared in a sickly talent.
Tell me!
I must know;
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Ian Bowen
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John Oconnell 11 February 2010

good morning Ian - on my 2nd reading of this poem I thoroughly enjoyed it but you are too modest. I am getting into the system and feel generous on the whole. full marks for this poem, a 10. Have a good day! john

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Sicelo Sithole 08 February 2010

I love this piece. well done Ian

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Adam Reed 08 February 2010

i no my rhymes is tight lol. pretty good señor haha =)

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