Tuesday, May 30, 2006

Written During A Downpour Comments

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The fierce rain falling fast from angry clouds
Descends suddenly, not in silence; its fall is swift;
It rolls down rapidly, the rain so sad,
Muffling the music of many a lark's sweet song,
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David Mitchell
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Mary-Elizabeth Conn 30 May 2006

Rainstorm outside or rainstorm of wonderful ideas in your head? ! I really like this; it's really descriptive and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You describe everything so well. I especailly like the line ' The music we hear more clearly now is the melody of many a winged creature '. Well done! Keep up the good work :)

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