Monday, August 10, 2015

Writing Comments

Rating: 4.7

Writing my life away,
In a poem every day,
Wish I were a bell or chime,
Just to rest my heart, from Time,
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Sandra Feldman
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Chuy Amante 11 August 2015

the tyranny of rhyme it seems to tick then tock at least it goes quiet when I try to talk not always does it work funny crap rolls forth it ascertains my jerk lots of class but all 4th!

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Rajnish Manga 10 August 2015

Beautiful poem with fresh experiments such as- And the tyranny of rhyme.. Thanks.

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Bernard Snyder 10 August 2015

Short yet so sweet! Nice one.!

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Mj Lemon 10 August 2015

Hi Sandra, This is such a wonderful poem....a 10. So many of us lament writers' block. There is another side to the story. Great poem.

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