Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Writing Comments

Rating: 4.1

I write, but it will never be
As beautiful as a pond, cloud, or tree
Men can make wine with the aid of a grape
Honey is produced by a bee
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Joseph J. Hernandez
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Adrian Miller 23 August 2012

An interesting little poem. I find it very true.

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Robin Bennett 22 August 2012

great piece. I like the message in this, even though it is short it says a whole lot. Anyway, poems about clouds... boring.... I would much rather read this. Great job!

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Joseph Anderson 22 August 2012

Well, you have made a good start, stay with it..Like your rhyme pattern and enjoyed this one. Also liked the brevity. Will review more later

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Joseph J. Hernandez

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