Monday, July 2, 2007

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Once thought an obsession
In more naïve times
I later learned kept my
Heartbeat in rhyme.
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Lorene Kinsey
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Alison Cassidy 03 July 2007

An interesting piece Lorene. I guess it is an obsession - this thing we call love. It is certainly the subject of some of the finest poetry ever penned. Not sure about your last line. Is the second, the second of two? And the thirty two - the age my current lover found me when I was 18. I thought he was soooooooooooooo old! Fascinating piece. love, Allie xxxx

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