Saturday, January 8, 2005

Writers Block Comments

Rating: 4.8

This mind is restless-
raising this body
in the night,
to crinkled words
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Adryan Barnathan
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Robert Rorabeck 11 January 2005

very nice poem- great abstract imagery- well crafted- no errors: O

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 January 2005

Ahhhh! But the quality of those lines, that is what counts. So what little pink there is it will illuminate new lines from you. H

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