Saturday, April 12, 2008

Writers Block Comments

Rating: 4.3

slumbering inches
away from the
neonlit tonic offering
little repose
...
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Paul Stoned
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Kyle Shield Laster 21 July 2008

'....yet words fail to record last night’s reverberations...' nice line. i've a little bit of writer's block myself. ugh.

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Malini Kadir 14 June 2008

Slumber eluding.....words getting shapes... Compressed feelings poetry great!

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Abha Sharma 16 April 2008

till the sun raises its sober wake-up-call face conducting the trumpeting traffic innovative imagery....compressed phrases, overall interesting poem...well composed

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Jurietta Duraan 12 April 2008

Hi, NPM. Ric sent me your poem.... it is excellent and very well written... I see you already have my view on the subject *smiles*

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