slumbering inches
away from the
neonlit tonic offering
little repose
...
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Slumber eluding.....words getting shapes... Compressed feelings poetry great!
till the sun raises its sober wake-up-call face conducting the trumpeting traffic innovative imagery....compressed phrases, overall interesting poem...well composed
Hi, NPM. Ric sent me your poem.... it is excellent and very well written... I see you already have my view on the subject *smiles*
'....yet words fail to record last night’s reverberations...' nice line. i've a little bit of writer's block myself. ugh.