Thursday, December 15, 2016

Writer's Hitting Concrete Noise Walls Comments

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silence seeking
writer's
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Terence George Craddock
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Unwritten Soul 16 December 2016

...Because when only we stay in peace, calm will return inside..so idea will run :) Wait a min why i can hear anything now? ? ? ? oh no i am in mars....i rather stay in earth: P maybe hahahaha

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Paul Brookes 16 December 2016

We all have to suffer this we live if we live in a city with the constant drone of traffic or people who seem unable to bear silence and seem need to talk or have what they laughingly call background noise. So this poem sums this up perfectly but even in the country my city friends say there's noise what the about out those pesky birds waking us up at the crack of dawn! ! ! ! So to some the noise of the city is home. Give me the country anytime. I love the resonance of the words and the repetition of 'concrete noise wall' which ties everything together Enjoyed thanks

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