Tuesday, May 9, 2006

Writer's Block Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have I forgotten,
How to write?
I sit and think,
With all my might...
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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
David Threadgold 03 September 2008

Hi Dee. Some days its hard to find the words but you seem to be having no problems with this one. well done. Regards Dave T.

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well put, 'trying too hard, ' I can't write a thing especially if I think someone else is going to read it.

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Been there done that Dee! ((smile) Honestly though this is a great poem...really it is, mostly because we all have thought those same thoughts! It is always nice to be able to relate to a poem.Also your title catches the eye and it just is an overall good well wriiten verse that you stumbled on! Thanx for sharing........... =Shelley=

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Been there done that Dee! ((smile) Honestly though this is a great poem...really it is, mostly because we all have thought those same thoughts! It is always nice to be able to relate to a poem.Also your title catches the eye and it just is an overall good well wriiten verse that you stumbled on! Thanx for sharing........... =Shelley=

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Melvina Germain 10 March 2007

You keep stumbling girl and don't you worry, you'll bounce right back. I too have wondered many times if it's over for me and my writing was just another phase in my life. Well those thoughts could be basis for an upcoming poem. I look forward to reading more and more of your work Dee.---Melvina---

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Ebone' Ingram 04 January 2007

hey...you did well for having writer's block... eni da kid

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R H 21 July 2006

An eloquent portrayal of frustration - think I'm there at the moment... Justine

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Brian Griffin 15 June 2006

lol i get that everyday.not only in writing, but in everyday life. good poem, dee.

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Valsa Terron 01 June 2006

Anna is right, we all know what you mean.. In the privacy of our minds we've all asked ourselves...'How much rhyme is too much rhyme? '...so very often, time after time....hahahaha Love, Valsa

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Anna Russell 18 May 2006

I think we can all realate to this one Dee! Great little poem. Hugs Anna xxx

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DEE...NICE WRITE...VERY WITTY & ALL SO TRUE...TRUST ME, IT AIN'T JUST YOU...WE ALL GET IT...ME ESPECIALLY! LOOKS TO ME THAT YOUR FUNK IS IN THE PAST...A 10 FOR YIR REBOUND! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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Nalini Hebbar 15 May 2006

thats real funny...the way you write-i see no block...not even a pebble...love, nalini

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Great poem, you have no need to worry about writing. Just let it go and it will come back, keep writing, best wishes, Rissa: : -)

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Chuck Audette 10 May 2006

This doesn't sound like writer's block, but a serious case of rhymitis. Much easier to deal with. Fun one! -chuck

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Duncan Wyllie 10 May 2006

Take time to breathe through your words, you have much tallent Love duncan

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Scarlett Treat 09 May 2006

When it becomes that much of a struggle to write, time to walk away for a while. As for rhyming-phooey!

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