Sunday, February 3, 2019

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just ignore me I am the invisible one, one who stands on the periphery
unnoticed at parties, chameleon taking on the wallpaper hue
one who watches and listens to the fights, divisions, with derision or....
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Andy Brookes
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Bri Edwards 13 January 2020

PH strikes AGAIN: " orpanties" Ok, this one i like, the poem that is. to MyPoemList. " adjective: up-skirt (of a photo or video) taken surreptitiously from an angle so as to see up a woman's skirt or dress." [[ i got caught in the grocery store up-kilting a Scotsman! ]] bri ;)

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Hazel Durham 04 August 2019

An outstanding and a very clever write, I really enjoyed that all of life was in your poem wth a swagger of your cast of characters!

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Bipasha D 05 February 2019

An extremely powerful poem. I think to be a writer or poet one needs to be a keen observer. Full vote for this one.

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