Friday, June 22, 2007

Write In Sand And Stone Comments

Rating: 4.7

Today, my friend yelled at me.
I wrote in sand my friend yelled at me.
Today, my friend punched me.
I wrote in sand my friend punched me.
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natalie vail
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Violet Llewellyn 16 August 2007

This is a beautiful, meaningful poem. Top marks. -Storm

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Amanda Eckert 13 July 2007

This is a great poem......good job with it!

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beautiful imperfection 02 July 2007

wow...this is the perfect example of what a true friend should be. Great poem!

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