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I like it very much. Smart, well thought and very direct. Not very touching though. But I am a bit of dark fan, so what do I know? Don't count my opinion. U are good.: D

Well thought penning.

All your poems are well done. Congratulations!

it's smart! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I like it but at first I didn't really then as I read it I liked it :) Very nice thought :)

Guys, I love your comments. keep them coming. i will look at them and conform to your advices if they truely add value to my writing. Thank you.

leaky, mi like the way your poem is to the theme....it's like saying something in a brief and precise manner leaving the audience with a complete thought of your work.

I do not want to lie about my feelings on this poem. I find it has a message you want to communicate and unless i am mistaken you have vaguely managed that, instead i feel you have mixed up whatever you wanted to say in order to create a rhythm which is not of paramount importance this type of poetry which won't be read aloud. And the title? From me Leakey it's 4.5/10 but i'll proceed to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing

Good I agree with you

Very nice thought and message too..

may your dream come true, good work

very nice. but i have the weakness. I also do dream but it drifts away before actionized. This poem is indeed a great message for a man like me who can not conceal even a single word. must vote for EXCELLENT

Great work leakey, I love the way this poem is captivating.