Thursday, June 5, 2008

Write Away Your Fears Comments

Rating: 4.0

I opened my book
And started to write
As shadows formed
Around the light
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Jenny Diamond
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Greenwolfe 1962 07 June 2008

This is a simple, but very creative poem and I may have given it a 9 but it was so simple in its content that the substance of the poem is insufficient to warrant a 9. Otherwise, this is a true poem in every sense of the word. The writer is very skilled and I shall take not of her. Greenwolfe 1962

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~ Jon London ~ 05 June 2008

Nicely thought out piece, flows well..great job best wishes Jon

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