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An adorable piece of poetry. I can't add anything extra that great Daniel has put. Top score and to my favourite.

My dear friend, this is a blessed poem. And I call you my friend because you have written this brave poem, which reveals the struggle you endured to write it. But you had to write it so that what is invisible is made visible so that other poets can see what being a poet truly means. It means suffering experienced and welcomed for the sake of others, so that their path of suffering will be flooded with l-i-g-h-t and they will already know the h-o-p-e you had to find on your own. You give light and hope to those coming after you and that is why your poem is blessed.Sincerely, Nosheen - HAFEZ

Beautiful poem poured out from your heart. Very well said, its a healing, an exit. Loved reading each lines.

To teach others with the peace of your love. Nice work.

Your poem melody Is nice & beautiful: '...What better time than this starry night Above, an immense sky Moon, a fierce white Its garish light seeping into the skin...'