Thursday, November 2, 2006

Writched Souls Comments

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O- you wretched souls of the night
Be careful of the eternal light
Why have you chosen to play evil
To manipulate and ill
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Berhan Mehari
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Lidia Yeibio 11 November 2006

Wow Birhan, nice worning. Short but with full message. I like it. Lidia.

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Peter A. Crowther 10 November 2006

Nice memorable last line. I wonder what 'pup' means at the end of the poem - 'posted up' maybe?

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A. B. 10 November 2006

There's time for everything. Nice one! Peace.

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