Wrinkles in time
trite phrase yet true
where life creates chaos
it leaves wrinkles in you
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As one who has pleanty of wrinkles, I think this is lovely.
very true... where life creates chaos..it leaves wrinkles in you... some wrinkles can be clearly seen.. but there are also those that are unseen... Very well written!
Your poem has put a new wrinkle in the definition of wrinkle....'all leave their mark/both inside and out...' You have taken a trite phrase and given it new life and meaning. Tom
This is one of my favorite styles in poetry and you have written with much wisdom.