Wednesday, December 19, 2007

Wrinkles Comments

Rating: 4.1

Wrinkles in time
trite phrase yet true
where life creates chaos
it leaves wrinkles in you
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Mary Havran
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Patti Masterman 23 January 2009

This is one of my favorite styles in poetry and you have written with much wisdom.

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Al Ramos 23 February 2008

There is truth in simplicity. You did it again.

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Helena Bispos 02 February 2008

As one who has pleanty of wrinkles, I think this is lovely.

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V F 24 January 2008

very true... where life creates chaos..it leaves wrinkles in you... some wrinkles can be clearly seen.. but there are also those that are unseen... Very well written!

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Tom J. Mariani 29 December 2007

Your poem has put a new wrinkle in the definition of wrinkle....'all leave their mark/both inside and out...' You have taken a trite phrase and given it new life and meaning. Tom

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