Wrinkles Comments

Life is unpredictable so why stop living before leaving.............a very nice composition..........

The rain will not always fall And the sun will not always shine so true, , , , life is never predictable, , , it can change anytime, , , ,

for i am growing younger means what? is the last stanza a set of your suggestions for the living? if so, they aren't all that bad; i mean they are pretty good. thanks for sharing.

A good piece, we never know what's on the horizon.

Lovely, the rain will not always fall and the sun will not always shine, a reality beautifully embodied in your poem