Wringing Out A Tone... Comments
Waiting I was this far,
Waiting for your call,
Waiting to hear you in my heart,
Waiting to be heard that bad;
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I like how yo poem goes through like a story or video to a love song and i could see a clear picture... i liked the sensitivity, and how u explain the pain of someone waiting patiently for a call
very emotional....sensitive and painful. ignorance is the worst disrespect one can pay to a sensitive heart. thank you sir, loved the poem.
somehow it seem so true. hope you hadnt lived this painy experience well done its really touchy
the pain of love when sumone ignores you... lovely composition..! !
Very realistic poem. I feel as if it is something that I can relate too. After reading 'Caught! ' I see why you asked me to read this haha. Nice write once again.
good one! Also, the little things in a relationship that brings tears to our eyes are etched in our memories to cherish them later with a smile on our face.
One enjoys the poem best when one finds some relation with the content and scraps of their personal life...You have touched the chords of my heart because I wait for a call...just liek the poem says.....it was great......thanks for sharing...
wow....it realli touched ma heart real deep.....u highlighted da truth in an awesum manner
very nice and touchy poem. one that comes from the heart always touches the heart. pain is a part of our life and usually get it from the one we love the most. for whom we are even ready to give away our life.take care
Waiting with anticipation that end in pain and dismay- very poignant, honest, expressing a universal experience. such a moving title, you caught me off guard with this one. the theme was on my mind, you have expressed it totally. 10+ Mamta
A very poignant poem, that reaches out and touches the heart! Love cascades in melancholy with an - unanswered call.. An eloquent write Kesav! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad
A tender, compelling account of unqualified emotional pain. I envy the heart that can retell this experience. I wish that I had ever experienced such sorrow.
I remember times like that in my life and I know how painful it is. Well put, Kesav! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn
Good play on words Kesav, heartfelt piece, waiting for the call that doesn't come Lynda xx 10
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7/19/2025 12:17:14 PM # 1.0.0
Amazing!