Thursday, November 16, 2006

Wretched Day Comments

Rating: 4.5

All wound up in its own cloak of misery
Rain weeping out of every pore
How this day has utterly drained and dampened me
Left me like an old boot washed ashore.
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Sophia White
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Landrey 22 November 2006

Dreadfully dark. Also perfect rhyme and very good meter. I usually try to stay at home and in bed during these days...and when this sort of day is in my heart I write poetry or eat cheese. -landrey

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