Saturday, March 13, 2010

Wren Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dark ivied wall
what do you hide?
What tiny bird
is housed inside?
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‘Bring forth profusion…’ This profusion is a vast canvas can be written in myriad ways… Poet wants readers to decipher it…nice first servise…to be returned by readers lolol Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Raj Arumugam 24 March 2010

many thoughts packed in a few lines; the lines are intense and packed with a lot of punch, Sally

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Ian Bowen 22 March 2010

Sally, sweet little piece. Dilwyn

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nomad omnia 19 March 2010

My favourite bird...and you have said why that is so. N

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