Thursday, October 3, 2013

Wren Songs Comments

Rating: 5.0

Taking the allotments path
One morning, I found myself
Caught up in melodies as
Two wrens, invisible, trilled
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Susy Evelyne
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Khairul Ahsan 24 October 2013

This is such a lovely poem! Beauty and brevity combining to make it look so special! 'Far-carrying songs to each other. Their notes travelling overhead, Piercing spring air as clearly As the rays of sun.' Only a poet's ears can hear these beautiful songs, her eyes see the imagery and the inner eyes draw it out for the readers to marvel at! 10/10.

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John Brown 23 October 2013

Beautiful little birds, with their up-tilted tails. I watch them often whilst working on my own allotment.

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