Monday, October 2, 2006

Wreckers Comments

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There's a storm lashing the sea
Raging winds whip the salt waves
While a curtain of rain, makes it difficult to see
A sailing merchant ship is running close to shore
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Deci Hernandez 10 October 2012

You did chose a weird poem of mine to read and i meant it to be weird. it needs some work yet. but i chose this poem of yours to read and isn't it true. the cruelty and cowardliness in our world? i invite you to read my Blue Glass and A Mean Man (short) or Bubbas' Hotel. they are not weird except blue glass.. is very identical, which is kinda weird.

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