Wrecked Poem by Stella Adaeze Ogwatta

Wrecked

Rating: 3.7

We remember the wails;
Their anguish pierced like nails.
The awful silence that followed those piercing screams
made our eyes turn glassy streams.
But the tears...they refused to fall.
When the attackers all marched in one
To their vulturine dens,
Every footstep taken
Savagely wrecked our beings with fear.

The soil welcomes the corpses,
Gloomy skies rain down curses.
Each figure lowered to the dust
Soon to be covered with crust.
Dreadfully, we await dawn
In a mood too forlorn.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspiration: Killings in Aba, Nigeria in 2017. Ipob-Nigerian Army clash AKA Python Dance. When wrong and foolhardy decisions are taken, many would have to go down!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D.N. Rebb 28 June 2024

I couldn't even imagine this horrific life. You have experienced a lot of pain. And have captured it in Poetry.

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2) " The soil welcomes the corpses, Gloomy skies rain down curses." Sends shivers through my spine. Great poem. Remarkable. Top score

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Addresses the continuing violence very sharply, incisively. Draws a gloomy picture. But indeed of very high poetic quality "

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