Wreckage Comments

I read all your work, I like this one most. Alot of feeling here, and I think you have the chance to be an excellent writer. My only advice is that you should maybe try and deliver the message in a shorter frame...it's hard to draw readers in with poetry that is extremely long. Allthough the oddyssey was one long poem, and others do it regularly, so maybe its not so bad. Either way, I think your a great writer with some excellent emotion and opinions. Check out some more of mine if ya get a chance