Wreakage Comments

I like the internal rhyme in lines 11 and 13: shoulder, older. I'm not much of a poet or a scholar, but I think you mean WRECKAGE instead of WREAKAGE, in both the title and second-to-last line. Love the poem. Really makes you think about life and choices.

To see people go this way, especially if they’re young... But a good thing you take from this—a reminder of our mortality.-Glen

Happens everyday. We pause and continue on.