Wednesday, August 26, 2009

Wrapped In Splendor Comments

Rating: 5.0

Within the whorl of
cacophony and ecstasy
dances a vision of clarity
beyond me and my spree
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John Weber
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Wonderfully worded my friend!

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Patti Masterman 22 September 2009

You really have a way with words and seem to excel at this sort of abstraction in a poem, which dances by like a whirlwind and yet the meaning is perfectly obvious.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 August 2009

A perfect craft of wording. An absolute beauty.

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~ Jon London ~ 26 August 2009

John my friend, an excellent flowing piece...You continue to create some fine fine works.....keep'm coming...I admire your craft....Solid work 10+++++

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John Weber

John Weber

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