Within the whorl of
cacophony and ecstasy
dances a vision of clarity
beyond me and my spree
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You really have a way with words and seem to excel at this sort of abstraction in a poem, which dances by like a whirlwind and yet the meaning is perfectly obvious.
John my friend, an excellent flowing piece...You continue to create some fine fine works.....keep'm coming...I admire your craft....Solid work 10+++++
Wonderfully worded my friend!