Wednesday, January 20, 2016

Wrapped In My Gaze Comments

Rating: 5.0

She was dressed solely in my gaze
wrapped in it
and she asked me: how do I look? does it fit me?
my neighbours gaze was a bit too tight
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Echo of the forest
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Elena Sandu 02 February 2016

Fantastic gem, your poetry, Alexandru, is a most gorgeous piece of art! Music, painting and motion all in one to ease the reader's soul with a glass of love, a drop of play and even the whispers of a neighbour's voice. Excellent penning, thank you for share!

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Echo Of The Forest 21 January 2016

Thank you very much sir Waseem Sherif. I am most honoured by your impression and very glad that my poem has reached your soul giving birth to such gentle feelings. Hope you will continue reading my poems :)

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Waseem Sherif 20 January 2016

your poem is wrapped in beautiful imagery and delivers silky and soft feelings. thanks for sharing and welcome to poemhunter.

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