Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Wrap Me In Beauty I Am Too Ugly Comments

Rating: 4.8

I was wrapped in beauty,
I forgot myself!
Life a balloon inflating with my breaths,
Sometimes I found me in the ocean of mermaids,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 January 2016

Life's journey is well expressed in this poem with cute little words of inflated balloons, mermaids, roses and many more. Thank you for sharing your thought here..

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Kelly Kurt 13 January 2016

I, like many, have had my balloon burst. The fabric stretched and eroded and the air inside dispersed to the winds. Your poem reminded me of the beauty before the rupture, and the occasional desire to have again what will never be. It is a profoundly human poem. Thank you

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Valsa George 12 January 2016

I enjoyed your balloon ride. Sad it got over inflated and burst! Very boisterous imagination! ! A 10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 12 January 2016

A beautiful poem literally......thank you for sharing :)

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