This is such a sad but heartfelt and thought-provoking write, Elena. Best lines Broken soul, forced loneliness, and Quiet Nothingness. I hope and pray the wounds of your soul heal soon. Take care, God bless you, Elena.
10 Nov 2011 by Gita Ashok
lovely heartfelt poem Elena. time.
10 Nov 2011 by heather wilkins
Wow! An incredible write, flowing and passionate... moving and deep
10 Nov 2011 by robyn selters
Very sad but lovely poem. Many blessings.... Pat
10 Nov 2011 by Patricia Darcy
A heartfelt poem but sad. God bless. tfs
11 Nov 2011 by Ravi Sathasivam
I see a lot of the Japanese values in this poem especially in the last 3 lines...beautiful, a little sad, yet the lines and verse are radiant...
12 Nov 2011 by Raj Arumugam
Well penned and heart felt poem.
12 Nov 2011 by Light H2o
Such a good read my friend
21 Nov 2011 by Shakespeares Waste Bin (RIP)
Words filled with sadness life has its hard times but we must carry on, not always easy cheers and regards
23 Nov 2011 by Ken e Hall
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This is such a sad but heartfelt and thought-provoking write, Elena. Best lines Broken soul, forced loneliness, and Quiet Nothingness. I hope and pray the wounds of your soul heal soon. Take care, God bless you, Elena. 10 Nov 2011 by Gita Ashok lovely heartfelt poem Elena. time. 10 Nov 2011 by heather wilkins Wow! An incredible write, flowing and passionate... moving and deep 10 Nov 2011 by robyn selters Very sad but lovely poem. Many blessings.... Pat 10 Nov 2011 by Patricia Darcy A heartfelt poem but sad. God bless. tfs 11 Nov 2011 by Ravi Sathasivam I see a lot of the Japanese values in this poem especially in the last 3 lines...beautiful, a little sad, yet the lines and verse are radiant... 12 Nov 2011 by Raj Arumugam Well penned and heart felt poem. 12 Nov 2011 by Light H2o Such a good read my friend 21 Nov 2011 by Shakespeares Waste Bin (RIP) Words filled with sadness life has its hard times but we must carry on, not always easy cheers and regards 23 Nov 2011 by Ken e Hall