Friday, June 6, 2014

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Everything I find to be right in their place
Excepting you with whose love I was blessed.
The moment you disappeared, deserting myself
My known world did change entirely since then.
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Amitava Sur
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 June 2014

A heartfelt poem, though a painful one. It seems the pain just poured out from your heart. Very true said, search continues....Keep writing Sir, as far as possible. Loved the way you presented it.

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Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2014

A heart-wrenching poem, depicting your intense loss and all the feelings you are going through. You have touched me within and brought tears to my eyes, Amitava, I have felt your pain. Keep writing yourself into every poem, expression of loss is your love being shown. Very well written, Amitava. RoseAnn

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Colleen Courtney 07 June 2014

Melancholy made a nest inside my remains. What a wonderful line! Just one of many that make up this heart and soul felt poem. Well done!

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Gajanan Mishra 06 June 2014

very good writing, I like it. please read my poems and comment.

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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