Monday, January 18, 2021

Wounded Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unable to fly again
She was restrained
Flapping her wings on the ground
Wounded and defeated
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 August 2022

She was restrained flapping her wings on the ground, wounded and defeated....excellent poetic expression! Top score and to my favourite!

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Its the state of all, if the wings are cut the last refuge is death alone.

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M Asim Nehal 19 January 2021

A very sad end. So is life and its journey. Thought provoking poem.

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Lamar Cole 19 January 2021

Great insightful and heart touching poem.

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