Dance in my darkness
you child of light
and strike with the sword of light
to wound me.
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‘strike with the sword of light’ Hmm its Wisdom …this light is LIGHT to awaken from slumber Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
This so far is my favorite. Fresh images, and more modern in its execution than most I have read. I mean by that you have great thoughts and beautiful descriptions, but in this poem you leave enough unsaid to allow readers to enter the poem and experience that moment of inspiration for themselves.