Would You Spread, Humanity? Comments

well done merna, i like that feeling from you as being a member of this mad world, you are right when you said 'Humanity is the best thing at all If we spread it, it wont fall humanity is the pity, sympathy and mercy people need humanity to live in peace and without envy' this stanza is killing me well penned merna keep it up.

I wonder If you ever wonder the same and I still wonder... My Humane Friend! I touched your INNOCENT HUMANITY throughout the poem! bright thoughts! a talented girl! PeaCe&LoVe. Thanks For Sharing Merna

'' why we are asking for peace, humanity and fairness? '' you did answer this question very well.. you wrote this poem.. i wonder you are really 14.. i am sure you have a very good talent and also a very good sense.. please let me know about your new piece..

humanity is the essence of co-existence...good poem Merna...you convey your noble thoughts very well in your write...10

wow its really a good poem and it feels to my heart because, the humanity to care is my craze and dream..I may add this poem to your comments in my new book... very charming poem is this one.. love the idea and your thought which positive and humanitariun... like this stanza... Humanity is the best thing at all If we spread it, it wont fall humanity is the pity, sympathy and mercy people need humanity to live in peace and without envy.

my friend! ! there is something in vertical dimensions...... before we should progress (i think) spread humanity within our innerselves first very nice piece of peace this poem is lovely :)

good poem, agreat idea, astrong sentences, well done and keep writing

very good name for a poem..perfect.good job

Life is very precious, like water.We need water to live so treasure it.Nice writes Merna.