Saturday, April 23, 2005

Would You Recognise It Comments

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What if a butterfly
became a catepillar
- would you recognise it?
it being beautiful no more
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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn
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Mary Nagy 18 November 2005

Interesting thought Stephanie! Great poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Tony Jennett 09 October 2005

Thirteen poems and a good start Even though free verse is anathema to me I bow to your talent. HOWEVER you better stop writing about yourself and your feelings or you're gonna run out of new things to say. Depersonalise and Good luck

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Michael Shepherd 13 September 2005

A lovely poetic idea, Stephanie - though 'caterpillar' for 'worm' would make the reverse transformation clearer! Would it be 'anarchy'? i think not -except to our preconceptions. Actually a return to source - there's a thought! Jah, veel lekker.

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Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

Stephanie van Oudtshoorn

East London, South Africa
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