Would You Leave Me, Love? Comments

nice visual metaphor I lost your soul, your rhythmic pounding No longer floating in my sky nice lyric poem 10

That's so amazing. I can't believe just how perfect that poem is. I know that feeling all too well, and I don't care what anyone says, it's the worst thing in the world. When you believe it's true love and it just fades away, you feel like you will never love again. I feel like I will never love again, 'cause it happened to me. I hate it.

I’ll never find true love, it seems Maybe that is not my road? Rachel Ann Butler

So we must end here I bade you goodbye Indeed, I feel our love just died I lost your soul, your rhythmic pounding No longer floating in my sky a beutiful and meaningful romantic poem.. well done, its intersting way written..perfect and thoughful indeed.. the question is expressed in lovely way..which shows your love for him more then he does..well done..10/10

poignant but truly beautiful poem -10 anjali

fine sad expression! Love do not leave us, it play with us...... 10+

nice piece, full of romance and melancholy you become lost whilst in reading.very tender poem.

u took my breath away with this one... u R gifted and aMaZinG! ! ! ! !

Wow...........this is deep and heartfelt ;) amazing! 10+ Keep it up!

great depth in this. i love it hope to see more from you